There was a monster in GLPS. The monster was a rapper, and she was very good at rapping. She was so good at rapping that when he starts to rap, everybody shuts their ears. She was about 190cm, and that is why the monster was called 'monster'. The monster was a girl, and she was large, long, leopard looking.
One peaceful day, the monster played sports with other friends. They were playing basketball, and the monster made a decision. She made up her mind to score a goal. At one point, she jumped to throw the ball. On that point, she was free, and wild. However, the ball in her hand slipped and fell down. As the ball fell down, the monster fell down with the ball.
After that accident, everybody in GLPS looked at her awkwardly, and she got too much stress, so she died.
It was nice to start with being sarcastic about a monster being a rapper;however, I do not see any links between her being monster, rapper and the death. I think It would have been better if it was about the result caused by being a silly rapper or monster. ^^ Anyway, It was nice to see your blog.
ReplyDelete"He was so good at rapping that when he starts to rap, everybody shuts their ears. He was about 190cm" You were calling him as a man, then suddenly you said that the moster was a girl, so fix those parts please.
ReplyDeleteYour story makes no sense. What does falling with the ball have to do with death? But I liked the story because you wrote it. ㅋㅋ
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